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Once such a beautiful angel
she was pure and good and kind
she loved the world and everything in it
and was the one you'd love to find
she had a wonderful gift
to turn everything she touched into light
but then she fell into a darkened trap
one were she had to fight

The fight turned her soul black
her goodness soon vanished
and was replaced with her bitterness
she grew cold and angrey and unloving
began to hate her misserbile sad life
there was no hope for her
only dispaire and thats how our angel turned

She was once such a beautiful angel
now her wings and eyes are black
her long brown hair turned black and grey
and now on one can stand her her bite


Once so innocent
once so pure
our angel fell from grace
and now you can't see her face
for she hides behind her hair
behind her eyes are her tears
the ones she can no longer weep

Our once beautiful angel
now feels all alone
unloved and uncared for
except for one secret boy
he watches her from a distance
and prays for her dark soul
hoping one day his angel will reapear
but her fate is so unclear...

Our once beautiful angel
is filled with only fear
I think this is my fav poem!! Some of it is about me and some of it is just something I made up :aww: enjoy!!

Once such a beautiful angel (C) me

If anyone wishes to use it please ask permission from me :D thank you
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rubianca Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2005
I. Loved. It. :+favlove:
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Half-Vamp Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2005
AWW! LUVZ THE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant say how much i luved that theres no words to describe how touching and auwsume it waz!!!!
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DerryBabe Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2005
yeeeeeee :D thank you SO so so so so much Kelly :hug: Thankies for the wonderful comment!! Y'know I may put that in a fic!! :D heehee ty :smooch: :hug: :glomp: :cuddle:
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Half-Vamp Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2005
lol, kool
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Hobbidance Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2005
Aww! Thats so good!! :hug: I love it!! Well done!
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DerryBabe Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2005
awwwwwwww thank you Lou :hug: your awesome hun :D
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ElfinSorceress0530 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2005
Awww, pretty, that's a gorgeous poem. I really like how you've written this and used a varity of words and repition. KUTGP (Keep up the good poems) :hug: :+fav:
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DerryBabe Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2005
:glomp: thankies Saz :hug: aww huggles for you :hug: :hug: :hug: thank you sooooo much hunnie :aww: thank you for the fav :cuddle:
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ElfinSorceress0530 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2005
No problem! I got your e-mail, THAT'S SO COOL!! :boogie: :hug: :glomp: :cuddle: :blowkiss: I replied!! No worries for the fave, the poem was awesome! :judge:
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DerryBabe Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2005
**:glomp:'s you tight*** yeeeeeeeeee I can't wait :boogie: lol :hug: :glomp: :cuddle: :blowkiss: ty It really means a lot to me :hug:
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